사용자토론:Hayoung1/연습장

Suggestions for editorial content-Chaeyeong Lee

I think it's a well-written Wikipedia article in general. However, if I have any additional suggestions, I think we need a big title for the whole article. Also, it would be more convenient to read if there are more links to characters or nouns. Thank you for your hard work! Chaeyeong09 (토론) 2024년 6월 13일 (목) 14:07 (KST)